Comments on my story? Do you like it?

Yay! I'm thirteen too, and I ADORE reading and writing. I love the story. But in the beginning try not using the word "Little" so much. I love it, and it's cute, but a little confusing. In the future, if you're still serious about writing DO NOT! post it on the internet. Some people are weird, and don't have enough talent to write it on their own, so I'd be really careful about letting people read it. Trust me, some jerk copied my writing and now her parents adore her for MY work. Just warning you. Ha ha ha! By the way, when the father's scolding her and saying she's almost fifteen so start acting like an adult, I would say "You're fifteen, so start acting like it." But that's just me. Most people won't care. I love it, by the way. Keep doing what you're doing! Hope I helped :D <3